I got a chance to take part in this festival last friday. It is a big party for the Dao and other ethnics. The small towns was crammed with people and ererybody was dressed up in their best. The main street in this towns is the important place to display their best products, for example, food, dress,handicraft,etc. It is also a good place for young people to go on a date.
The more excited place is the main fairground, which is the playground of the local elementary school. In this place, lots of Dao and Thai young people dance to their unique ethnic music. The scene is so beautiful that I forgot where I was.
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The KunMing is a capital of YunNan province, and have a well known name :Spring city. Just as its nickname, the climate of KunMing is very good. There is not summer or winter, only spring day. The lowest temperature in KunMing may be 3 Celsius degree and the maximum temperature may be 25 Celsius degree. The temperature is so moderate in most of time that there are not air-conditioner and fan in KunMing people’s home. The sky is blue, the temerature is moderate and the pace of life isn’t quick as other city, all of these are suitable for people to live in KunMing. So, there are little local people want to leaving KunMing for a job.
However, There are some aspectes should be noted for people come from other city. First of all, the plateau effect in KunMing is rather obvious for newcome people. Some newcomer may feel shortness of breath while do some light exercise. Secondly, if you want to go out for shopping or other things, you should take a umbrella with you. Because the ultraviolet radiation in KunMing is so intense that the local girl’s skin is not good. The most importantly, the climate of KunMing is very dry in witer. You should drink much water as you can, and keep the lipstick with you.
Generaly speaking, the KunMing is a best city for human live
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1.常用于文章开始的q渡词语和句?/font>
(1)To begin with首先
例：To begin with,smoking should be banned in public areas.“首先Q公共场所止吸烟?#8221;
(2)Generally speaking一般地_M上说
例：Generally speaking,it is the best policy to spend more money on libraries.“ȝ说来Q加大图书馆的投资是良策?#8221;
(4)With(the development/progress/growth)of(economy/society)…随着(l济、社??发展、进步、增?…
例：
With the development of society,women′s role has become more important
than ever before in daily life.“随着C会的发展，妇女在社会生zM比以往发挥着更加重要的作用?#8221;
(5)Recentlyq来
例：RecentlyQthe problem(conflict,production)of grain shortage has become the world focus.“q来_食短缺问题已成为全球关注的焦点?#8221;
2.常用于文章结q渡词和句子
(1)In conclusion最后，在结束时
例：In conclusion,the international agreement should be made to prevent the world from war.“最后，应达成国际协定世界避免战争?#8221;
(2)In briefa?br /> 例：In brief,family planning is of vital importance in China.“a之，计划生育对中国具有重要意义?#8221;
(3)In a wordM
例：In a word,without mutual understanding,true friendship does not exist.“MQ没有相互理解，真正的友谊是不存在的?#8221;
(4)It is high time that…?#8230;时候了
例：It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the economic development.“Z促进l济发展到该解决问题的时候了?#8221;
(5)It is only when…that…只有?#8230;?#8230;
例：It is only when people become the masters of the country that science can serve the people.“只有当h民成为国家的MhQ科学才能ؓ人民服务?#8221;
3.常用于表C先后次序的q渡词语及句?/font>
(1)first,second,third…W一Q第二，W三
例：
First,she had studied chemistry during her junior years.Second,she
never missed a class.Third,she performed every required experiment in
all her chemistry courses.Fourth,she always worked hard.Her classmates
were sure that she would win top award in Chemistry during her senior
year at the
university.“首先Q她在一二年U时选修了化学课E。其ơ，她从不误课。再有，她认真完成每一ơ化学试验。还有，她学习非常刻苦。因而同学们
信她在高年U时会获得学校化学大奖?#8221;
(2)To begin with…,moreover…,finally…Q首?#8230;Q此?#8230;Q最?#8230;
例：
There are a few reasons for his decision of studying law.To begin
with,he is very interested in social affairs and it seems the best way
to enable him to engage in these activities.Moreover,his father is a
lawyer.He has always encouraged him to do something similar.Finally,he
is sure he can get a job after
graduation.“他决定学法律有几斚w的原因：首先Q他对社会事物感兴趣Q学习法律有助于他参与这些活动。此外，他父亲是个律师，一直鼓׃从事
同样的职业。最后，他确信毕业后能找到工作?#8221;
(3)Meanwhile同时
例：
Meanwhile,the better skills and knowledge children possess,the more
opportunities they will be ensured.“同时Q孩子们的技Z知识掌握得越好，今后的机会就多?#8221;
(4)since then自此之后
例：Since then,the Olympics turned out to be an instrument of peace and freedom for small nations.“自此之后Q奥林匹克运动成为小国争取和q_自由的工兗?#8221;
(5)Therefore因?br /> 例： Therefore,if this is included in good education that parents are seeking now,their children will be definitely ensured a bright future.“因而，如果父母们在其ؓ孩子们寻求的良好教育中加入这一点，他们的子奌定会有一个光辉灿烂的未来?#8221;
4.常用于表C因果关pd分析原因的过渡词语与句子
(1)As a result׃…l果
例：Her performance in college was excellent.As a result,she has got a satisfactory job.“׃她在大学成W优异Q她扑ֈ一份o人满意的工作?#8221;
(2)Due to׃
例：My trip to Guang Zhou and Shen Zhen has to be cancelled due to the financial problem.“׃财务问题Q我d州和深圳的旅行取消了?#8221;
(3)consequentlyl果Q因?br /> 例： The government was unwilling to risk a conflict with that neibouring country,and consequently,promised to sign the treaty.“该国政府不愿冒险与邻国发生冲H，因此{应{v条约?#8221;
(4)One may criticise……for……Qbut the real cause of…lies deeperZ可以因ؓ…批评…Q但?#8230;的真正原因在更深层次
例：
One may criticise the school authorities for the fire accident,but the
real reason of the accident lies deeper.“Z可以q灾事故批评校领导Q但事故q有更深的原因?#8221;
(5)Among…reasons,one should be emphasized that…在众多的原因中，其中一点给予强?#8230;
例：
Among the most important reasons,one reason should be emphasized that
large pieces of cultivated land have been occupied,which results in the
grain shortage.“在许多重要的原因中，其中一点应的是造成_食减是因为大量的可耕地被占用?#8221;
5.常用于比较和Ҏ的过渡词
(1)unlike…?#8230;不同
例：Unlike oral English,written English is comparatively formal.“与口头英语不同，W头p比较正规?#8221;
(2)In contrast…与之相比
例：In contrast with Tom,Mario seldom studies harder.“与汤姆比Q玛里奥很少努力学习?#8221;
(3)On the other hand…另一斚w
例：
The life expectancy in developing countries has increased during the
past thirty years.On the other hand,the infant mortality has decreased
from twenty percent to ten percent in the same
period.“发展中国家的期望寿命在过ȝ30q间都增长了。另一斚w婴儿M率同期由20%下降?0%?#8221;
(4)Likewise同样
例：Plenty of food must be packed for the journeyQlikewise,warm clothes will also be needed.“要带上旅行中吃的食品Q同样也需要带上M寒保暖的衣服?#8221;
(5)similarly同样
例：
If only one can make his audience understood,it seems insignificant if
one makes some mistakes in his oral English;similarly,as to the
audience,they are only interested in grasping the meaning,not actually
mind or even hardly notice the speakers
mistakes.“只要能听众听明白，在口头英语中Z些错误是无关紧要的，同样作ؓ听众也只对讲话者的意思感兴趣Q根本不介意或几乎注意不到讲话?
所犯的口语错误?#8221;
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2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
最q的调查昄相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感?/p>
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
没有一发明像互联|一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评?/p>
4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.
Zg忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实?/p>
5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
来多的h开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束?/p>
6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
说到教育Q大部分为其是一个终生的学习?/p>
7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.
许多专家指出体育ȝ直接有助于n体健店?/p>
8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign
tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local
environment and history from the harmful effects of international
tourism.
应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量Q努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响?/p>
9.
An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert
positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now
being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the
migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.
来多的专家相信移民对城市的徏设v到积极作用。然而，来多的城市居民却怀疑这U说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题Q像犯罪和卖淫?/p>
10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city
that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is
usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交RQ而R上可能已满蝲乘客?/p>
11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely
serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to
deal with it.
无可否认Q空气污染是一个极其严重的问题Q城市当局应该采取有力措施来解军_?/p>
12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
一调查显C妇xq退休?br />
12a. A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time.
In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.
As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
一份适当的业余工作ƈ不会占用学生太多的时_事实上，把全部的旉都用到学习上q不健康Q正如那句老话Q只工作Q不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻?/p>
14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.
M政府忽视q一炚w付出巨大的代h?/p>
15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention
of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.
Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on
their first day on campus.
当前Q一提到卛_开始的学校生活Q许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年Mh来说Q校园刚开始的日子q不是什么愉快的l历?/p>
16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施?/p>
17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide
them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills,
which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多Z发展人际交往能力Q而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的?/p>
18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still
have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and
exposure.
无可争辩Q现在有成千上万的h仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生zR?/p>
19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
管q一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在M地点、Q何年龄进行?/p>
20. No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life.
没有否认Q教育是人生最重要的一斚w?/p>
21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.
Z把会使用计算Z人生成功相提q论?/p>
22. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.
在过ȝ几十q_先进的医疗技术已l得h们比q去zȝ旉更长成ؓ可能?/p>
23. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.
事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本n一样重要?/p>
24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境?/p>
25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
Z怿拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会?/p>
26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to
believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.
从这几年我搜集的信息来看Q这些知识ƈ没有Z惌的那么有用?/p>
27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.
现在Qh们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教l学生所有的知识?/p>
28. This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.
q是一个关pd生死的问题，M国家都不能忽视?/p>
29. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:
我同意后者，有如下理由：
30. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.
在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观Ҏ重要的?/p>
31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.
q一观点正受到越来越多h的质疑?/p>
32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic
development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and
bicycle is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the
recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play
extremely important roles in modern society.
管许多为随着l济的高速发展，用自行R的hC减少Q自行R可能会消亡， 然而，q几q我攉的一些信息让我相信自行R仍然会l在CC会发挥极其重要的作用?/p>
33. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only
causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten
to end human life on our planet.
环境学家指出Q持l增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖q样严重的问题，而且q将威胁Chcdq个星球的生存?/p>
34. In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of
transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.
考虑到这些严重的状况Q我们比以往M时候更需要像自行车这L环保型交通工兗?/p>
35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to people's physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.
使用自行车有助于Z的n体健Pq极大地~解了交通阻塞?/p>
36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.
管自行车有许多明显的优点，但是它也存在它的问题?/p>
37. Bicycle can't be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.
在速度和舒适度斚wQ自行R是无法和汽R、火车这L交通工L比的?/p>
38. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the
conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages
and it will still play essential roles in modern society.
通过以上讨论Q我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点q大于缺点，q且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用?/p>
39. There is a general discussion these days over education in many
colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether
education is a lifetime study.
当前在高校和研究机构Ҏ育存在着大量争论Q其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终w学习的q程?/p>
40. This issue has caused wide public concern.
q个问题已经引v了广泛关注?/p>
41. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.
必须指出学习只能靠自己?/p>
42. A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they
had completed their education when they finished their schooling.
Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a
person's education is a most important aspect of his life.
许多人存在这L误解Q认为离开学校意味着l束了他们的教育。显Ӟ他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分q一基本事实?/p>
43. As for me, I'm in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:
我而言Q我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点Q有以下原因Q?/p>
44. It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.
Z普遍认ؓ高校是不可能在毕业的时候教会他们的学生所有知识的? 45. Even the best possible graduate
needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.
即最优秀的毕业生Q要xZ个博学的Z要不断地学习?/p>
46. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed
by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary
progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.
Z普遍认ؓ我们的现代科技使我们的C会发生了巨大的变化Q近几十qhcdU技斚w取得了惊人的q步?/p>
47. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that
learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing
their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
现在来多的h开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会?/p>
48. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.
一调查显C多老h都有到大学l学习的愿望?/p>
49. For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has
become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and
contentment after their retirement.
对大多数人来Ԍ退休以后，阅读或学习一Ҏ技术已成ؓ他们生活的中心和快乐的来源?/p>
50. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style,
it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an
old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.
对于那些惌上健庯有意义的生zȝZ来说Q找旉学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话Q活到老，学到老?/p>
51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon
of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.
对于大学或高中生打工q一现象Q校园里q行着q泛的争论?
52. By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve
their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will
never be able to get from the textbooks.
通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验?/p>
53. Although people’s lives have been dramatically changed over the
last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the
one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face
because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.
q几十年Q尽h们的生活有了惊h的改变，但必L认，׃学费和书Ҏ益飞涨，资金短缺仍然是学生们面的最大问题之一?/p>
54. Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.
因此Q业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们l他们的求学生活?/p>
55. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a
conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on
students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which
will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.
通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出l论Q业余工作对学生们会产生p的媄响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，q将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个C会?/p>
56. These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain
that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many
experts point out that, along with the development of modern society,
it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
现在Q越来越多的Z开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指是现代社会发展必然的l果Q无法避免?/p>
57. It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have
become an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and
work more comfortable and less laborious.
Z普遍认ؓ计算机和其他机器已经成ؓ我们C会必不可少的一部分?它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动?/p>
58. At the same time, along with the benefits of such machines,
employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they
are able to control them.
同时Q随着q些机器带给我们的好处，员工们也必须要学习与之相关的知识以便使用它们?/p>
59. No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.
没有否认q一基本事实Q对于一般工人来ԌL掌握q些技术是不可能的?/p>
60. In the second place, there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.
W二斚wQ失业的Z乎太多而又没有_的工作岗位?/p>
61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying
new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in
job market.
成千上万的h们不得不p更多的精力和旉学习新的技术和知识Q得他们在׃市场能保持优ѝ?/p>
62. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a
strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in
order to get more money to support their family.
Ҏ最q的一调查，来多的h表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补脓家用的强烈愿望?/p>
63. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the
leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern
society, it is not necessary a bad thing.
通过以上讨论Q我完全怿Q随着CC会的进步，q闲的生zL式正在消失ƈ不是件坏事?/p>
64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.
q些q_国际旅游的问题引起了q泛x?/p>
65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive
effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to
promote international tourism.
许多为国际旅游对l济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地Ҏ府发展国际旅游?/p>
66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism
may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local
history.
但是q些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响?/p>
67. As for me, I'm firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited, for the following reasons:
我而言Q我坚定地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限Ӟ理由如下Q?/p>
68. In addition, in order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial
facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on
the environment.
另外Qؓ了吸引旅游者，大量人工设施被修建，q对环境是不利的?/p>
69. For
lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any
more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may
eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.
׃~Z独特的文化，一些地方不再吸引旅游者。因此，国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最l会D当地旅游业的衰|?/p>
70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.
q些q_父母要求他们的孩子接受额外的教育呈增长的势头?
71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.
q一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了q泛x?/p>
72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy
obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are
able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge,
which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets
when they grow up.
许多安怿额外的教育活动有许多优点Q通过学习Q他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后Q这些对他们׃是大有好处的?/p>
73. In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on
physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is
equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra
studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.
首先Q额外的学习对孩子们的n体发育是不利的。教育专家指出，孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后，从事一些体育活动，而不是额外的学习Q是非常重要的?/p>
74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of
physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.
孩子们正处于w体快速发育时期，~Z体育ȝ可能会对他们未来的生z造成严重的媄响?/p>
75. In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of
children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional
educational activities.
W二Q从心理上讲Q大部分孩子g寚w外的学习没有什么好感?/p>
76. It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.
当别的孩子在玩耍的时候，很难惌一个学生能集中_֊在课本上?/p>
77. Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate
with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to
develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They
may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.
而且Q由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流Q很隑֟M们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤ȝ至生某些心理疾病?/p>
78. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the
conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious
advantages, its disadvantages shouldn't be ignored and far outweigh its
advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after
school.
通过以上讨论Q我们可以得出结论：管额外学习的确有很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。因此，攑֭后强q孩子额外学习是不明智的?/p>
79. Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children
to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All
work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
M安都应非常重视保持孩子在学习与玩耍的qQ正如那句老话Q只工作Q不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻?/p>
80. There is a growing tendency for parent these days to stay at home
to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.
现在Q父亲或母亲留在安照顾他们的孩子而不愿过早返回工作岗位正成ؓ增加的趋ѝ?
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一Q?不一_DisagreementsQ?br /> 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一_它还包括了数的不一致 时态不一致及代词不一 致等Q?br /> 例１Q?When one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(Z旦有了钱Q他p惛_什么就q什么．)
剖析Qone是单数第三hUͼ因而本句的have应改为has ;同理Qwant应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一_
改ؓQ Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二． 修饰语错位（Misplaced ModifiersQ?br />
p与汉语不同，同一个修饰语|于句子不同的位|，句子的含义可能引起变化．
对于q一点中国学生往往没有引v_的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１Q?I believe I can do it well and I
will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析Qbetter位置不当Q应|于句末Q?br />
三． 句子不完_Sentence FragmentsQ?br />
在口语中Q交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等Q不完整的句子完全可以被理解Q可是书面语׃同了Q句子结构不完整会o意思表达不清，q种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，W者又惛_些补充说明时发生Q?br />
例１Q?There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析Q本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子Q仅Z些不q诏的词语，不能独立成句Q?br />
改ؓQThere are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper.
四． 悬垂修饰语（Dangling ModifiersQ?br />
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混ؕ不清Q例如：At
the age of ten, my grandfather died. q句中＂at the age of
tenQ只点出十岁Ӟ但没有说?#8221; ?#8221;十岁Ӟ按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,
如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语Ҏ一点，全句׃那么费解了．
改ؓQ?br />
When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例１Q?To do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析Q句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚．
改ؓQ?br />
To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五． 词性误?Misuse of Parts of Speech)
“词性误?#8221;常表CؓQ介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用{．
例１Q?None can negative the importance of money.
剖析Qnegative pdŞ容词Q误作动词?br />
改ؓQ?br />
None can deny the importance of money.
六． 指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关pM清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句：
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因ؓ她要她做她的伴娘?
d上面q一句话Q读者无法明地判断两位姑娘中谁结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引v误解的代词的所指对象加以明，意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改ؓQ?br />
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
?. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析Q句中hUC词we 和反w代词yourself指代不一致。改为：
We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七． 不间断句?Run-on Sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?L下面的例句?br />
例１Q?There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析Q这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.” 以及“We get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了?br />
改ؓQ?br />
There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：
There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside
world
八． 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction)
Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学旉紧迫Q教师^时在q方面花的时间往往极其有限Q媄响了学生在写作中没有L良好的推Ԍ斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所Ԍ拿来q。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是?br />
例１Q?The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(农业斚w化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染?
剖析Q显Ӟ考生把obstacles“障碍”Q?#8220;障碍?#8221;误作substance“物质”了。另?#8220;the increasing use (不断增加的?” 应改?#8220;abusive use (滥用)”?br />
改ؓQ?br />
The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九． 累赘(Redundancy)
a以简zؓc写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组Q能用词l的不用从句或句子。如Q?br />
In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句?#8220;the fact that he is lazy”pd谓语从句Q我们按照上q?#8220;能用词组的不用从?#8221;可以改ؓQIn spite of his laziness, I like him.
例１Q?For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析Q整个句子可以大大简化?br />
改ؓQ?br />
Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十． 不连?Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前a不对后语Q或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病?br />
例１Q?The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析QThe fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数斚w不一致?br />
改ؓQ?br />
Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一Q?l合性语a错误(Comprehensive Misusage)
所?#8220;l合性语a错误”Q是指除了上q十U错误以外，q有诸如时态，语态，标点W号Q大写{方面的错误?br />
?QToday, Money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc.
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1Q表C原?
1QThere are three reasons for thisQ?
2QThe reasons for this are as followsQ?
3QThe reason for this is obviousQ?
4QThe reason for this is not far to seekQ?
5QThe reason for this is thatQ．Q?
6QWe have good reason to believe thatQ．Q?
例如Q?
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our lifeQFirstlyQpeople’s living standard has been greatly improvedQSecondlyQmost people are well paidQ?and they can afford what they need or likeQLast but not leastQmore and more people prefer to enjoy modern lifeQ?
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如QGreat changes have taken place in our lifeQ?There are three reasons for thisQ这样写可以避免套用中的表达p?
2Q表C好?
1QIt has the following advantagesQ?
2QIt does us a lot of goodQ?
3QIt benefits us quite a lotQ?
4QIt is beneficial to usQ?
5QIt is of great benefit to usQ?
例如Q?
Books are like friendsQThey can help us know the world betterQand they can open our minds and widen our horizonsQThereforeQreading extensively is of great benefit to usQ?
3Q表C坏?
1QIt has more disadvantages than advantagesQ?
2QIt does us much harmQ?
3QIt is harmful to usQ?
例如Q?
HoweverQ? everything divides into twoQTelevision can also be harmful to usQIt can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televisionQ?
4Q表C重要、必要、困难、方ѝ可?
1QIt is importantQnecessaryQdifficultQconvenientQ?possibleQfor sbQto do sthQ?
2QWe think it necessary to do sthQ?
3QIt plays an important role in our lifeQ?
例如Q?
Computers are now being used everywhereQwhether in the governmentQin schools or in businessQSoonQ?computers will be found in every homeQtooQWe have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer AgeQ?
5Q表C措?
1QWe should take some effective measuresQ?
2QWe should try our best to overcomeQconquerQthe difficultiesQ?
3QWe should do our utmost in doing sthQ?
4QWe should solve the problems that we are confrontedQfacedQwithQ?
例如Q?
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more seriousQThereforeQwe must take some effective measures to solve itQ?
6Q表C变?
1QSome changes have taken place in the past five yearsQ?
2QA great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communicationsQ?
3QThe computer has brought about many changes in educationQ?
例如Q?
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five yearsQThe major reasons for these changes are not far to seekQNowadaysQmore and more people are switching from grain to meat for proteinQand from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitaminsQ?
7Q表CZ实、现?
1QWe cannot ignore the fact thatQ．Q?
2QNo one can deny the fact thatQ．Q?
3QThere is no denying the fact thatQ．Q?
4QThis is a phenomenon that many people are interested inQ?
5QHoweverQthat’s not the caseQ?
例如Q?
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollutionQTo solve these problemsQ?we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollutionQThe government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environmentQ?
8Q表C比?
1QCompared with AQBQ．Q?
2QI prefer to read rather than watch TVQ?
3QThere is a striking contrast between themQ?
例如Q?
Compared with carsQbicycles have several advantages besides being affordableQFirstlyQthey do not consume natural resources of petroleumQSecondlyQthey do not cause the pollution problemQLast but not leastQthey contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exerciseQ?br /> 9Q表C数?
1QIt has increasedQdecreasedQfromQ．QtoQ．Q?
2QThe population in this city has now increased QdecreasedQto 800Q?00Q?
3QThe output of July in this factory increased by 15Q?compared with that of JanuaryQ?
例如Q?
With the improvement of the living standardQthe proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increasedQ?
再如Q?
From the graph listed aboveQit can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000Q?
10Q表C看?
1QPeople haveQtakeQadoptQassumeQdifferent attitudes towards sthQ?
2QPeople have different opinions on this problemQ?
3QPeople take different views ofQonQthe questionQ?
4QSome people believe thatQ．QOthers argue thatQ．Q?
例如Q?
People have different attitudes towards failureQSome believe that failure leads to successQ?
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavorQHoweverQ?others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losersQ?
再如Q?
Do “lucky numbersreally bring good luckQDifferent people have different views on itQ?
注：一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，考生应掌握这一写作Ҏ?
11Q表C结?
1QIn shortQit can be said that Q．Q?
2QIt may be briefly summed up as followsQ?
3QFrom what has been mentioned aboveQwe can come to the conclusion that Q．Q?
例如Q?
From what has been mentioned aboveQwe can come to the conclusion that examination is necessaryQhoweverQ?its method should be improvedQ?
注：例句1可用于Q何一个段落的l论句；例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句?
12Q套?
1QIt’s well known to us that Q．Q?
2QAs is known to usQ．Q．
3QThis is a topic that is being widely talked aboutQ?
4QFrom the graphQtableQchartQlisted aboveQit can be seen that Q．Q?
5QAs a proverb saysQ?#8220;Where there is a willQthere is a wayQ
例如Q?
As is well known to usQit is important for the students to know the world outside campusQ?
The reason for this is obviousQNowadaysQthe society is changing and developing rapidlyQand the campus is no longer an “ivory towerԌAs college studentsQwe must get in touch with the world outside the campusQOnly in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduateQ?
再如Q?
Does it pay to be honestQThis is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on itQ?/span>
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In any prisoner’s life is not the minister of justice, not the commissioner of prisons, not even the head of prison, but the warder in one’s section. If you are cold and want an extra blanket, you might petition the minister of justice, but you will get no response. If you go to the commissioner of prisons, he will say, “Sorry, it is against regulations.?The head of prison will way, “If I give you an extra blanket, I must give one to everyone.?But if you approach the warder in your corridor, and you a re on good terms with him, he will simply go to the stockroom and fetch a blanket.
I always tried to be decent to the warders in my section; hostility was self-defeating. There was no point in having a permanent enemy among the warders. It was ANC policy to try to educate all people, even our enemies: we believed that all men, even prison service warders, were capable of change, and we did our utmost to try to sway them.
In general we treated the warders as they treated us. If a man was considerate, we were considerate in return. Not all of our warders were ogres. We noticed right from the start that there were some among them who believed in fairness. Yet, being friendly with warders was not an easy proposition, for they generally found the idea of being courteous to a black man abhorrent. Because it was useful to have warders who were well disposed toward us, I often asked certain men to make overtures to selected warders. No one liked to take on such a job.
We had one warder at the quarry who seemed particularly hostile to us. This was troublesome, for at the quarry we would hold discussions among ourselves, and a warder who did not permit us to talk was a great hindrance. I asked a certain comrade to befriend this fellow so that he would not interrupt our talks. The warder was quite crude, but he soon began to relax a bit around this one prisoner. One day, the warder asked this comrade for his jacket so that he could lay it on the grass and sit on it. Even though I knew it went against the comrade’s grain, I nodded to him to do it.
A few days later, we were having our lunch under the shed when this warder wandered over. The warder had an extra sandwich, and he threw it on the grass near us and said, “Here.?That was his way of showing friendship.
This presented us with a dilemma. On the one hand, he was treating us as animals to whom he could toss a bit of slop, and I felt it would undermine our dignity to take the sandwich. On the other hand, we were hungry, and to reject the gesture altogether would humiliate the warder we were trying to befriend. I could see that the comrade who had befriended the warder wanted the sandwich, and I nodded for him to take it.
The strategy worked, for this warder became less wary around us. He even began to ask questions about the ANC. By definition , if a man worked for the prison service he was probably brainwashed by the government’s propaganda. He would have believed that we were terrorists and Communists who wanted to drive the white man into the sea. But as we quietly explained to him our nonracialism, our desire for equal rights, and our plans for the redistribution of wealth, he scratched his head and said, “It makes more bloody sense than the Nats.?o:p>
Having sympathetic warders facilitated one of our most vital tasks on Robben Island: communication. We regarded it as our duty to stay in touch with our men in F and G, which was where the general prisoners were kept. As politicians, we were just as intent on fortifying our organization in prison as we had been outside. Communication was essential if we were to coordinate our protests and complaints. Because of the greater numbers of prisoners coming and going in the general section, the men in F and G tended to have more recent information about not only what was happening in the movement, but about our friends and families·······
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I never considered myself unique, but people are constantly telling me, "you are a miracle." To me, I was just an ordinary "guy" with realistic goals and big dreams. I was a 19-year-old student at the University of Texas and well on my way toward fulfilling my "big dream" of one day becoming an 1)orthopedic surgeon.
On the night of February 17, 1981 I was studying for an 2)Organic Chemistry test at the library with Sharon, my girlfriend of three years. Sharon had asked me to drive her back to her dormitory as it was getting quite late. We got into my car, not realizing that just getting into a car would never quite be the same for me again. I quickly noticed that my gas 3)gauge was registered on empty so I pulled into a nearby convenience store to buy $2.00 worth of gas. "I'll be back in two minutes," I yelled at Sharon as I closed the door. But instead, those two minutes changed my life forever.
Entering the convenience store was like entering the 4)twilight zone. On the outside I was a healthy, athletic, pre-med student, but on the inside I was just another statistic of a violent crime. I thought I was entering an empty store, but suddenly I realized it was not empty at all. Three robbers were in the process of committing a robbery and my entrance into the store caught them by surprise. One of the criminals immediately 5)shoved a .38 6)caliber handgun to my head, ordered me to the cooler, pushed me down on the floor, and pumped a bullet into the back of my head - execution style. He obviously thought I was dead because he did not shoot me again. The 7) trio of thieves finished robbing the store and left calmly.
Meanwhile, Sharon wondered why I had not returned. After seeing the three men leave the store she really began to worry as I was the last person she saw entering the store. She quickly went inside to look for me, but saw no one-only an almost empty cash register containing one check and several pennies. Quickly she ran down each aisle shouting, "Mike, Mike!"
Just then the 8) attendant appeared from the back of the store shouting, "Lady, get down on the floor. I've just been robbed and shot at!"
Sharon quickly dropped to the floor screaming, "Have you seen my boyfriend? He has 9)auburn hair." The man did not reply but went back to the cooler where he found me choking on my vomit. The attendant quickly cleaned my mouth and then called for the police and an ambulance.
Sharon was in shock. She was beginning to understand that I was hurt, but she could not begin to comprehend or imagine the severity of my injury.
When the police arrived they immediately called the 10)homicide division as they did not think I would survive and the 11)paramedic reported that she had never seen a person so severely wounded survive. At 1:30 a.m. my parents who lived in Houston, were awakened by a telephone call from Brackenridge Hospital advising them to come to Austin as soon as possible for they feared I would not make it through the night.
But I did make it through the night and early in the morning the 12)neurosurgeon decided to operate. However, he quickly informed my family and Sharon that my chances of surviving the surgery were only 40/60. If this were not bad enough, the neurosurgeon further shocked my family by telling them what life would be like for me if I 13)beat the odds and survived. He said I probably would never walk, talk, or be able to understand even simple commands.
My family was hoping and praying to hear even the slightest bit of encouragement from that doctor. Instead, his pessimistic words gave my family no reason to believe that I would ever again be a productive member of society. But once again I beat the odds and survived the three and a half hours of surgery.
Granted, I still could not talk, my entire right side was paralyzed and many people thought I could not understand, but at least I was stable. After one week in a private room the doctors felt I had improved enough to be transferred by jet ambulance to Del Oro 14)Rehabilitation Hospital in Houston.
My 15)hallucinations, coupled with my physical problems, made my 16)prognosis still very bleak. However, as time passed my mind began to clear and approximately six weeks later my right leg began to move ever so slightly. Within seven weeks my right arm slowly began to move and at eight weeks I uttered my first few words.
My speech was extremely difficult and slow in the beginning, but at least it was a beginning. I was starting to look forward to each new day to see how far I would progress. But just as I thought my life was finally looking brighter I was tested by the hospital europsychologist. She explained to me that judging from my test results she believed that I should not focus on returning to college but that it would be better to set more "realistic goals."
Upon hearing her evaluation I became furious for I thought, "Who is she to tell me what I can or cannot do. She does not even know me. I am a very determined and stubborn person!" I believe it was at that very moment that I decided I would somehow, someday return to college.
It took me a long time and a lot of hard work but I finally returned to the University of Texas in the fall of 1983 - a year and a half after almost dying. The next few years in Austin were very difficult for me, but I truly believe that in order to see beauty in life you have to experience some unpleasantness. Maybe I have experienced too much unpleasantness, but I believe in living each day to the fullest, and doing the very best I can.
And each new day was very busy and very full, for besides attending classes at the University I underwent therapy three to five days each week at Brackenridge Hospital. If this were not enough I flew to Houston every other weekend to work with Tom Williams, a trainer and executive who had worked for many colleges and professional teams and also had helped many injured athletes, such as Earl Campbell and Eric Dickerson. Through Tom I learned: "Nothing is impossible and never, never give up or quit."
Early, during my therapy, my father kept repeating to me one of his favorite sayings. I have repeated it almost every day since being hurt: "Mile by mile it's a trial; yard by yard it's hard; but inch by inch it's a cinch."
I thought of those words, and I thought of Tom, my family and Sharon who believed so strongly in me as I climbed the steps to receive my diploma from the Dean of Liberal Arts at the University of Texas on that bright sunny afternoon in June of 1986. Excitement and pride filled my heart as I heard the dean announce that I had graduated with "highest honors", been elected to Phi Beta Kappa, and been chosen as one of 12 Dean's Distinguished Graduates out of 1600 in the College of Liberal Arts.
The overwhelming emotions and feelings that I experienced at that very moment, when most of the audience gave me a standing 17)ovation, I felt would never again be matched in my life-not even when I graduated with a masters degree in social work and not even when I became employed full time at the Texas Pain and Stress Center. But I was wrong!
On May 24, 1987, I realized that nothing could ever match the joy I felt as Sharon and I were married. Sharon, my high school sweetheart of nine years, had always stood by me, through good and bad times. To me, Sharon is my miracle, my diamond in a world filled with problems, hurt, and pain. It was Sharon who dropped out of school when I was hurt so that she could constantly be at my side. She never wavered or gave up on me.
It was her faith and love that pulled me through so many dark days. While other nineteen year old girls were going to parties and enjoying life, Sharon devoted her life to my recovery. That, to me, is the true definition of love.
After our beautiful wedding I continued working part time at the Pain Center and completed my work for a masters degree. We were extremely happy, but even happier when we learned Sharon was pregnant.
On July 11, 1990 at 12:15 a.m. Sharon woke me with the news: "We need to go to the hospital?my water just broke." I couldn't help but think how ironic it was that my life almost ended in a convenience store and now on the date "7-11" we were about to bring a new life into this world. This time it was my turn to help Sharon as she had helped me over those past years.
She was in labor for 15 hours. At 3:10 p.m. Sharon and I experienced the birth of our beautiful daughter, Shawn Elyse Segal!
Tears of joy and happiness came to my eyes as our healthy, alert, wonderful daughter entered this world. We anxiously counted her 10 fingers and her 10 toes and watched her wide eyes take in the world about her. It was truly a beautiful picture that was 18)etched in my mind forever as she lie in her mother's waiting arms, just minutes after her birth. At that moment I thanked God for blessing us with the greatest miracle of all-Shawn Elyse Segal.
我从未觉得自׃众不同，但h们常Ҏ_“你的生命是个奇qV”对我而言Q我只是一个普通hQ有着现实的目标和q大的理惟뀂我曾是德克萨斯大学一名十九岁的大学生Q在通向理想之\上信步前行，梦想有一天我会成Z名整形外U医生?/p>
1981q??7日的晚上Q我和交往三年的女友沙伦在为有机化学测试做准备。因为太晚了Q沙伦叫我驾车把奚w回宿舍。我们钻q汽车，谁能惛_在今后的生命中我不能再如此矫健地重复q样一个简单的动作。我很快发现油表IZQ于是我把R泊在附近的一家便利店旁，想买两块q汽a。“我两分钟就回来Q”我关上车门朝沙伦喊到。但是q短短的两分钟改变了我一生的命运Q永q地改变了?/p>
q入q家便利店就如同t上了阴阳间的奈何桥Q门外的我还是个健康的，z蹦p的未婚大学生Q而门内的我却成了暴力犯罪的又一个牺牲品。我q以为店里没有hQ但我突然发现我错了——有三个匪徒正在打劫q家店，而我的进入让他们有些惊慌失措。其中一个匪徒迅速掏Z把口径ؓ38毫米的手枪用力指着我的_勒o我走到冷L旁，然后把我推倒在圎ͼ像执行死刑般从后面朝我头部开了一枪。他没再朝我开W二枪，昄他以为我M。打劫完后三个劫匪逃之夭夭?/p>
与此同时Q沙伦对我的不归忧心忡忡。看到这三个匪徒d便利店后她真的很担心Q因为我是她见到的最后一个进入店里的人。她赶快跑进店来找我Q只见几乎被一扫而空的收银机上挂着一张帐单，q有几枚币散落在上面，四周无h。她在货枉飞快地跑着、喊着Q“迈克，q克Q?/p>
q时一名服务员从店后面走出来叫刎ͼ“小姐，q来一下，我刚才被打劫了，他们q向我开了枪。?/p>
沙u跌跌撞撞地过来哭喊到Q“你见到我的h友了吗？长褐色头发的。?那h默默走到冷冻机旁Q找C我，此时呕吐快o到我H息了。他赶忙帮我擦干了嘴Q叫了警察和救护车?/p>
沙u被吓坏了。渐渐地Ҏ明白我受伤了Q但是她Ҏ惌不到伤势的严重性?/p>
警察来了Q他们很快断定是杀人案Q因为没人相信我q能z过来，而救护h员说她从来没有见q伤势如此严重的人可以逃离d。下午一点半Q我住在奥斯汀的父母被来自布莱肯瑞吉医院的电话铃惊醒，医院通知他们快赶到奥斯汀Q因Z们认为我熬不q当晚了?/p>
但那晚我Zq来Q第二天清晨经外科ȝ军_l我动手术。但他立卛_知我的家人和沙u我存zȝZ只有癑ֈ之四十。然后他q雪上加霜地告诉我的家hQ向他们描述如果我万q活下来面临怎样的生zZ—我可能再也不会走\了，不会说话了，甚至不能理解一些极其简单的命o。这些对我的家h来说都是莫大的打凅R?/p>
本来安人祈望能从医生的口中听到一点点鼓励的话Q而他悲观的言语让他们没理q信我q会成ؓ一个对C会有用的h。在l历了三个半时的手术之后，我再ơoq地zM下来?/p>
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意识上的q觉和生理上的病疾我的病情预断非常的ؓ茫。然而时间的飞逝我的意识开始变得清晎ͼ大约六个星期以后我的双可以d地活动了Q七周以后我的右臂开始缓慢地zd了，八周以后我终于开口说话了?/p>
说话对于我非常地艰难q且开始的时候说得很慢，但是ȝ是开头了。我开始寄希望于新的一天的到来Q祈望着新的q步。但正当我以为生zLȝ初露光明的时候，医院里有个欧z来的心理学家对我做了测试。她向我解释刎ͼ从检的l果来看她坚信我不能再重q学校，劝我Ҏ不要抱有M希望Q希望我最好树立些更现实点的目标?/p>
她的q番l论让我怒不可遏Q“她是谁Q凭什么告诉我能做什么或不能做什么。她Ҏ不了解我。我是很坚强而固执的人！”我怿在那时我决定无论如何，L一天我会返回学校的?/p>
在经历了一q半垂死挣扎的生zdQ在漫长的等待和艰辛的付出后Q终于在1983q的U天Q我q回了d克萨斯大学。在奥斯汀接下来的几年里我生活得非常艰难，但我信Z看到生活中的真善你必须要经历一些苦难。也许我l历的苦隑֤多了Q但我有一个信念——充实地q每一天，力做到最好?/p>
日子q的很繁忙、很充实Q除了读书，每周我还在要在布p瑞吉医院接受三到五次的治疗。如果这q不够忙的话Q我q要隔周和汤姆·威廉斯飞到奥斯汀工作。汤姆是一个教l兼ȝQ他曾效力于许多大学校队和职业联队，q帮助过许多受伤的运动员Q如Q厄·坎贝尔 ?艄克¯_克森。从汤姆的n上我学到“没有什么是不可能的Q千万千万不要放弃，怸攑ּ。?/p>
早在我接受治疗的时候，父亲L重复他最q那句话，每天当我感到痛苦的时候我也对自己重复那句话，那就是“脚t实圎ͼ切勿急功q利。?/p>
1986q六月那个阳光明媚的午后Q当我步履蹒跚地C德克萨斯大学q安文学院的台阶接受文凭的时候，我思烦着q些话，惛_汤姆、父母还有沙伦，他们都那么坚定地l予了我信Q。当我听到院长宣布我以最高荣誉毕业时Q我的心中充满了骄傲和自信。接着他还宣布我被选入国大学优等生荣誉学会，q在1600名毕业生中当选ؓ12名_安文学院的杰出毕业生之一?/p>
当场有许多观众站h为我鼓掌Q那一Mo我心潮澎湃、百感交集。我甚至觉得生命中不可能再经历那L感慨和激情，q种x一直gl到我获得社会学的硕士学位，成ؓ德克萨斯止痛减压中心的一名全职工作h员。但q运之神再次眷顾了我Q?/p>
1987q??4日，我觉得再没有什么能与此时的快乐相提q论Q我和沙伦结婚了。沙伦是我高中时代的奛_Q风风雨雨九q来Q她一直陪在我w旁。对我来_Ҏ我的奇迹Q是我在q个充满困惑和伤痛的世界上拥有的一颗钻矟뀂ؓ了能日夜守侯在我的n旁，沙u在我受伤的时候放弃了学业。她的爱从未动摇q，她从未抛弃过我?/p>
是她的忠诚和׃着我度q了无数个黑暗的日子。当别的十九岁的奛_子参加舞会、n受生zȝ时候，沙u把青春献l了病床上的我，{待我的康复。对我来_q就是爱的真谛?/p>
在那个美满的婚礼之后Q我l箋在止痛中心做着D的工作，q获得了我的士学位。我们非常的q福Q而沙伦怀孕的消息更让我们恩爱有加?/p>
1990q??1?2?5分，沙u把我从梦中唤醒：“我们得d院了…?我羊水破了。”我忍不住想命运真让人啼W皆非，它几乎让我在那家便利店里丢了性命Q而在一个命名ؓ?·11”的日子里它却让我迎来新生命的出世。多q来沙u帮我度过了一ơ又一ơ难养Iq次该我来帮助她了?/p>
沙ul历?5个小时的分娩。在3?0分的时候，沙u和我一赯来了我们丽的女儎쀔—萧恩¯丽斯·斯高?/p>
当我看到丽的女儿健康地来到q个世上Q喜悦和q福化作泪水夺眶而出。我们迫不及待地数着她的十个手指和十只脚，看着她大大的眼睛注视着她的世界。初生的婴儿w在妈妈柔Y的怀里如一副优的囄永L的心中。那一刻，我感谢上帝赐予我们如此最伟大的奇q——我的萧恩¯丽斯·斯高?
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"BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS"
It was the evident will of Parliament and the nation that this should be conceived on the broadest possible basis and that it should include all parties. I have already completed the most important part of this task. A war cabinet has been formed of five members, representing, with the Labor, Opposition and Liberals, the unity of the nation. It was necessary that this should be done in one single day on account of the extreme urgency and rigor of events. Other key positions were filled yesterday. I am submitting a further list to the King tonight. I hope to complete the appointment of principal Ministers during tomorrow. The appointment of other Ministers usually takes a little longer. I trust when Parliament meets again this part of my task will be completed and that the administration will be complete in all respects. I considered it in the public interest to suggest to the Speaker that the House should be summoned today. At the end of today's proceedings, the adjournment of the House will be proposed until May 2l with provision for earlier meeting if need be. Business for that will be notified to M. P. 's at the earliest opportunity. I now invite the House by a resolution to record its approval of the steps taken and declare its confidence in the new government. The resolution: "That this House welcomes the formation of a government representing the united and inflexible resolve of the nation to prosecute the war with Germany to a victorious conclusion." To form an administration of this scale and complexity is a serious undertaking in itself. But we are in the preliminary Phase of one of the greatest battles in history. We are in action at any other points-in Norway and in Holland-and we have to be prepared in the Mediterranean. The air battle is continuing, and many preparations have to be made here at home. In this crisis I think I may be pardoned if I do not address the House at any length today, and I hope that any of my friends and colleagues or for mer colleagues who are affected by the political reconstruction will make all allowances for any lack of ceremony with which it has been necessary to act. I say to the House as I said to Ministers who have joined this government, I have nothing to offer but blood, toil, tears and sweat. We have before us an ordeal of the most grievous kind. We have before us many, many months of struggle and suffering. You ask, what is our policy? I say it is to wage war by land, sea and air. War with all our might and with all the strength God has given us, and to wage war against a monstrous tyranny never surpassed in the dark and lamentable catalogue of human crime. That is our policy. You ask, what is our aim? I can answer in one word, It is victory. Victory at all costs-victory in spite of all terrors-victory, however long and hard the road may be, for without victory there is no survival. Let that be realized. No survival for the British Empire, no survival for all that the British Empire has stood for, no survival for the urge, the impulse of the ages, that mankind shall move forward toward his goal. I take up my task in buoyancy and hope. I feel sure that our cause will not be suffered to fail among men. I feel entitled at this juncture, at this time, to claim the aid of all and to say, "Come then, let us go forward together with our united strength."
“热血、汗水和眼泪?/strong>
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Winston Churchill (May 13, 1940 ) On Friday evening last I received from His Majesty the mission to form a new administration.
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My fellow citizens, at this hour American and coalition forces are in the early stages of military operations to disarm Iraq, to free its people and to defend the world from grave danger. "On my orders, coalition forces have begun striking selected targets of military importance to undermine Saddam Hussein's ability to wage war. These are opening stages of what will be a broad and concerted campaign. " More than 35 countries are giving crucial support, from the use of naval and air bases, to help with intelligence and logistics, to the deployment of combat units. Every nation in this coalition has chosen to bear the duty and share the honor of serving in our common defense. "To all of the men and women of the United States armed forces now in the Middle East, the peace of a troubled world and the hopes of an oppressed people now depend on you. "That trust is well placed. "The enemies you confront will come to know your skill and bravery. The people you liberate will witness the honorable and decent spirit of the American military. "In this conflict, America faces an enemy who has no regard for conventions of war or rules of morality. Saddam Hussein has placed Iraqi troops and equipment in civilian areas, attempting to use innocent men, women and children as shields for his own military; a final atrocity against his people. "I want Americans and all the world to know that coalition forces will make every effort to spare innocent civilians from harm. A campaign on the harsh terrain of a nation as large as California could be longer and more difficult than some predict. And helping Iraqis achieve a united, stable and free country will require our sustained commitment. "We come to Iraq with respect for its citizens, for their great civilization and for the religious faiths they practice. We have no ambition in Iraq, except to remove a threat and restore control of that country to its own people. "I know that the families of our military are praying that all those who serve will return safely and soon. "Millions of Americans are praying with you for the safety of your loved ones and for the protection of the innocent. "For your sacrifice, you have the gratitude and respect of the American people and you can know that our forces will be coming home as soon as their work is done. "Our nation enters this conflict reluctantly, yet our purpose is sure. The people of the United States and our friends and allies will not live at the mercy of an outlaw regime that threatens the peace with weapons of mass murder. "We will meet that threat now with our Army, Air Force, Navy, Coast Guard and Marines, so that we do not have to meet it later with armies of firefighters and police and doctors on the streets of our cities. "Now that conflict has come, the only way to limit its duration is to apply decisive force. And I assure you, this will not be a campaign of half measures and we will accept no outcome but victory. "My fellow citizens, the dangers to our country and the world will be overcome. We will pass through this time of peril and carry on the work of peace. We will defend our freedom. We will bring freedom to others. And we will prevail. "May God bless our country and all who defend her." 同胞们，我们已经开始了对伊拉克的军事行动，我们要解除伊拉克的武装，解放伊拉克的人民Q避免世界陷入危险? 我已l下辑֑令，联军已经开始对固定的目标进行选择性打击，d销毁萨辑֧威胁q个世界的能力，q将是一ơ大规模的袭击，q只是一个初始的阶段? 臛_35个国家向我们提供重要帮助Q包括用他们的基地、分享情报、提供后勤支援。所有参加这场战争的国家和我们共同承担q䆾责Q、分享共同联手的荣誉? 那些L在中东地区的国士兵们，那里的和q_人民现在p靠你们了? 你们不负这些信仅R? 你们的敌人将到你们的勇敢和Q被你们解放的h民将会见证美国军队勇往的精，见证国人的_? 在这场战斗中Q美国所面对的敌人无视战争规则和道d准则。萨辑֧伊拉克军队讑֜了^民区Q企囑ְ无辜的妇奟뀁儿童、男ZZ护自己军队的盄Q这是他对自׃h民最后的暴行? 我希望所有的国人、全世界的h民都知道Q盟军将一切努力保证避免伤x辜h民，q可能会使我们的战争比预期更加艰难，旉更长。我们要帮助伊拉克h民实C个团l、稳定、自q国度Q这需要我们做出持久的承诺? 我们C拉克去，我们重伊拉克h民，q且重伊拉克h民伟大的文明和宗教信从ͼ我们对伊拉克q没有野心，我们只是去解除威胁，管理国家的权力重新归还l伊拉克人民? 我知道，国军队的家属都在ؓ士兵们祈P希望他们能够早安全q回? 成千上万的美国h正在祷亲h安全Q祈h辜h民能够受C护? 你们的牺牲将换来国人民的尊重，一旦Q务完成，你们尽快回家?国q不愿意q场冲突发生Q然而我们的目标是明的Q美国h民、我们的盟友不会对一个非法的政权心慈手YQ这个政权正使用大规模杀伤性武器威胁世界和q? 我们的陆军、v军、空军现在正直面q些威胁Q这是ؓ了避免以后我们的消防员、警察和ȝ在我们自q城市街道上面对这L威胁? 现在战争已经开始，速战速决的唯一Ҏ是坚决打击。我向大家保证，q不会是一场半途而废的战争，除非胜利Q我们不会Ş休? 我们的国家和世界面的危险将被解除，我们度q危险时期，l箋和^事业Q我们将保卫我们的自由，也将把自由带l其他h。我们一定会成功? 上帝保佑我们的国Ӟ保佑我们的战士们Q?br />
讎ͼ自Blog开通访问量以来H破100Q开个英文阅L目．以督促自己学好E文．Q?/em>
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